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Re: The Beginning of the End
"Feel free to tear it apart" I see what you did there..;)
Oct 19, 2017 -
Re: dear you
Kara! *Almost cries* I wasn't nearly bullied as badly as this in elementary school. Just called a girl a couple of times, someone put a chewed gum into my hair, ...
Oct 19, 2017 -
Re: Being A Poet
English is also not my first language:). Now i know I ain't the only one;)
Oct 18, 2017 -
Re: Parents
lots of blood ;)
Oct 18, 2017 -
Re: Parents
lots of love
Oct 18, 2017 -
Re: Parents
You can feel my frustration because I was a bit pissed off when i wrote it
Oct 17, 2017 -
Re: Parents
I did not see the criticism typo. Thanks for everything
Oct 17, 2017 -
Re: Parents
I really don't understand why this is in the spotlight...
Oct 17, 2017 -
Re: Parents
My soul is not for sale :P
Oct 17, 2017 -
Re: Parents
Thanks!:)
Oct 17, 2017 -
Re: be proud
#relatable poem I like it.:)
Oct 16, 2017 -
Re: The world i live in-Ch. 2
I am confused now. Someone told me that you must not put quotation marks if the character is not done talking. Maybe i didn't understand what the person wrote?
Oct 15, 2017 -
Re: The world i live in-Ch. 2
And yes, I am describing the brother opening his mouth with that line.
Oct 15, 2017 -
Re: The world i live in-Ch. 2
This really helps, of course I do!
Oct 15, 2017 -
Re: The world i live in-Ch. 2
@CaptainPanda13 would you mind pointing the mistakes out or highlighting them? It is kind of annoying to read all that while searching for mistakes. Now I know how my reviewers ...
Oct 15, 2017
