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Thanks!

Whoopsie! That journey ("yourney ")though. Silly me! And btw it wasn't supposed to rhyme ;).

@DemonGoddess, @KaiRyu, @Flumadiddle, @Sheytato

-sweet and simple

So you were depressed.

Thank you*

I think your Trust me acrostic poem is way better than this, love it!

Actually, moonglight can be orange. The moon can appear orange sometimes.

@Ladylizz

Ok:)

No problem! Tag me when you write the second chapter.

*Slowly claps* Are you proud of yourself?

You are right @Kairyu, I'll change it as soon as I can

Spot on! Glad you liked it.

Thanks @LadyLizzLovelace, but would you mind telling what is exactly wrong with the dialogue? I've tried fixing it and I obviously failed. I don't know how to fix these problems ...