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Honestly, I stopped using facebook a long time ago. It was overloadoed with memes and selfies and petty stuff but I just kept swiping even though knew I'd be disappointed ...

I can relate 100%

Oh, I see. Thanks.

Oh my gosh... This is too good.

Well, I don't think I've had experiences like that, sorry you had to go through that, but I happen to be asexual too and the sentence where you say that ...

I don't think there's anything to review here, aside from the few grammatical errors, everything seems "good". But are you "good"? The thing that interests me is that you mentioned ...

with each poem you get better

I love this.

Yes, I noticed the swearing problem, and when I thought about it a bit, and about what my character would do, it seemed off. The idiot thing as well.

I forgot to mention that this is an unfinished draft, and I am having some trouble finishing it, also I'm having a lil' writing block right now which is why ...

@Neptune Thank you so much! I must admitI rushed it a bit because I got excited and just typed it all out>.>

No problem :)

I love cocoa:) @Radrook. Oh, and, nice poem @Flumadiddle. I know I hacen't been on yws much these days.

Aww that's sweet but that was long, long ago:).

I'm bad at setting the scene