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Hey! Thank you for your suggestions and kind words! There's a reason why this poem is not just a one part poem, there'll be more to come. ;) So stay ...

Hello! I can't tell you who is going to die - or if there even is a death, because that would kill the point of having a long/short-running story. Sorry. ...

Hey Shauzer! Thank you for the kind words! Unfortunately, I actually did want to make this poem a little more interactive... visual, might I say. The words "over the cliff" ...

Hi! Thanks for the feedback! I was actually thinking about taking out the 'literally' earlier, so I'm glad that you've solidified my decision. :) And yes, you're right, this story ...

Hi GoldFlame! Thank you for reviewing, it really made my day! I'll definitely see if I can adjust the poem a bit (the parts that seem to contradict the narrator), ...

You're welcome, lovely! :D

Thank you for your constructive criticism! I'd like to clarify that the lowercase 'I's are intentional (it's a part of my style). It's free verse so the words don't have ...

Hi, thank you for you input! I really appreciate your feedback! On a side note, the uncapitalized letters (particularly the 'I's) are intentional. It's a part of my writing style ...