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Re: untitled
Review day review: This was so heartbreaking! The repetition of "i do" between stanzas really emphasized the fact that the narrator stuck by her(his?) wedding vows. I really enjoyed that. ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Centimeters
Ah, the pangs of heartache and shy, young love! "Why is it so hard To reach for your hand When it is mere Centimeters From mine?" I enjoyed this stanza ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: hashtag
Excellent work again, Sunsun! (That's my caveman name for you ;D) I keep seeing your glorious work here and there, so I knew I had to review! I think that ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Basket of Fruit
Hi Venonymous, I want to begin by saying that this is a great piece, not just because of its message, but also because of the excellent word choice. "Ignorance and ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: collarbones
Hi Sunkissed, This was truly beautiful. Beautiful in a tragic way, but nonetheless a piece of art. In this society, it is unfortunate that we are fooled into believing that ...
Mar 29, 2014 -
Re: numb.
Hi there! First things first, I like your username. What's interesting is that romance and realism don't really go together, you know? Check out the romanticist/realism movements if you don't ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: Is The Tick of The Clock
Honestly, I am in love with the personification and imagery of this poem. The ticking of a clock in place of a beating heart? Genius. The extension of the clock ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: profundus lumen, lumen amplexus.
I am stunned by this poem - you've done a marvelous job here. First off, the message of your poem is unique - I don't find too many poems about ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: Past, Present, Future
Hi! This poem really hit home for me, especially since I've just turned 16 a week ago. As a high school student, I find that the things I'm most afraid ...
Mar 16, 2014
