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Re: Partners in Crime: The Story of Lucky and Charlotte
Uh, this is a script. Like, I mean an actual script. Which is always cool. ~WickedWonder
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Dreamer - Chapter 2
I love your MC. Andra is smart, funny and quirky. Please keep writing ~WickedWonder
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Stupid writer's block.
Yay imagery! That was really cool. For writers block, I always listen to some of my favorite bands, usually their music helps me. Good luck ~WickedWonder
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 4
SOrry about that! My computer failed.
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 4
YOu are really good at suspense. I really want to know whats up with Liam, but introducing Cole was a good move. As usual, you spelling and grammar are good, ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Anne, for James
Very depressing ending! But it was very sweet and very romantic, so goo work on that. Your flow was good, too. ~WickedWOnder
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Decided To Break It~1
Thanks for the reviews, guys! I have another chapter to post, once review day is up!!
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: The Scars That Never Leaves [ REVISED ]
I hope i'm not too late, but the only thing I'd suggest doing wuld be setting a new paragraph with speech. Thats it Good work, and good like. I'm so ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: de artuate
That was, well, slightly disturbing! It was good, though, I liked it. It's weird, like you can really feel every single creepy emotion, which was cool. Keep writing ~WickedWonder
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Why the Earth is Beautiful
That was really beautiful, in a dark, gothic, way. I can really feel your emotions, your description was wonderful. You are a really good writer. Keep writing ~WickedWonder
Sep 22, 2010 -
Re: Golden Wings- Chapter 3
I haven't read the other chapters, but I will, I promise. Anyway, just it this piece it seemed flat and sort of lifeless. Add some emotion. Thats all I have ...
Sep 21, 2010 -
Re: The Boy Who Kissed My Hand: A Monologue
This kicks my monologue down the stairs. I'm serious. Yours is that good. your emotion is great, your description is spot on. Oh, I'm jealous. I wish I had skills ...
Sep 19, 2010 -
Re: Memories [Ch. 8]
Well, then. This is a very flat piece. Put some emotion into it You;re dealing with some hardcore stuff. Match it with the emotion. I think thats it. Keep writing. ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: Random thing I wrote
Oh, my gosh. I totally get how you feel...long story, but I do understand the emotion behind this. Anyway, this is literally perfect. I can't find anything wrong with it. ...
Sep 17, 2010 -
Re: Never let me go *Edited*
I'm a hopeless romantic, so that really played with my emotions. That was really good, but I didn't read the unedited version. Good work ~WickedWonder
Sep 14, 2010