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Thank you for your review! I have made a lot of mistakes on this, I consider it a rough draft I guess. Your review was good, I will make sure ...

Thanks Dog :). About the capitilizing thing... I wasn't quite sure if I should capitilize the lines. I am new to this whole poetry thing...But I will take that into ...

Thanks for your review! I do agree. Many things were out-of-place, this is what I consider my first draft. The world has never known peace, I do agree. In fact ...

Thanks so much! Okay! I didn't realize it didn't sound like a horse's POV, but I shall change that =). Thank you for your review

I think this is awesome, and better yet, so true! I am totally sharing this with my friends :P.