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I actually enjoyed this short story.. It showed a very good image of what was happening in my head. I think if you were to continue this story.. Maybe have ...

I actually enjoyed this short story.. It showed a very good image of what was happening in my head. I think if you were to continue this story.. Maybe have ...

The first part was really what caught my attention most. Especially This part "There is not a way to write About our Love Nor are specific words that clarify" That ...

Yes, this is fairly good, but I am too having a little bit of trouble with the first sentence, its not really portraying very much of an idea in my ...

Wow, this is fairly good.. I do agree with @AlexInCircusland , about the fourth line.. But then again, this is your piece and you seen to have like the way ...