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Re: After he left the revised version
Hello! I should start this review by saying how much I truly enjoyed reading this. The simple, yet realistically heartbreaking scene you set is enough to make my eyes water. ...
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: blue
Hii!! I shall start off by saying that blue is my absolute favorite color... NOW THAT I'VE PUT THAT OUT THERE I really like this. Like, a lot. It's so ...
Feb 28, 2017 -
Re: Storytelling, Suffering, and God: A writers perspective
Wow. That's my first response. This is incredibly insightful. I have to say, I've been a Christian since I can remember. I've grown up in the church, I was baptized ...
Feb 16, 2017 -
Re: judgement
Hello! I'd like to start off this review by saying that I really enjoyed this. The obvious distaste your protagonist has for society is admirable. I love the idea of ...
Feb 16, 2017 -
Re: I've been dead for a while now
Where to begin? I suppose I can start by saying holy crap. There are goosebumps on my arm from reading this piece. I literally could feel my lungs being squeezed ...
Feb 9, 2017 -
Re: My Friend Is A Painting
Hello yes I am back. Once again, you've outdone yourself. This is very good. I truly loved the originality you brought to this piece. I agree with Casanova here, the ...
Feb 9, 2017 -
Re: Granger Danger
I suppose I should begin by saying that I'm in love with this. Now, I'm a hardcore Fremione shipper (yeaaahhhh buuuudd) but I absolutely love love love Draco and Hermione ...
Feb 8, 2017 -
Re: I'm bitter in a way.
You're writing is very detailed, and it has a classic style to it. I loved how throughout the poem, you could practically feel the narrator's desperation and emotions throughout. The ...
Feb 8, 2017
