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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Nighttime and Morning

    Hi! Kolton here for a quick review. Your sister is actually really good! Why is she not on Young Writers? XD Moving on. I do find this particular sentence rather ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: January

    Me again! You've been busy, huh? Anyway, I agree @Audy on the rhyming thing. It sounds a bit awkward and slightly unnatural. Also, I feel as if you could've futher ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Noticed

    Hi, Kolton here for his 3rd review on YWS! Starting off, this is actually a great poem. It made me smile lots (wow, I have feelings. Didn't actually know that ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: One and One

    Hi! Kolton here on my second review ever here on YWS, so you should feel pretty damn special. I kid, I kid. Moving on. This piece is actually really nice! ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: A New Dawn

    Hello there! Kolton here giving you a review. Well, I have to say this is a beautiful piece of work. The words really join together nicely, and you have a ...

    Jul 15, 2014


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