wickedlylyrcal

Fantastic job! I did a super gasp when I came to then ending. It's so sad that thing like this do happen in the real world. It reminds me of ...

Hmmmmm I like it! I like the fact that you're trying to break past the barrier that bi and gays can't have the same passion as heterosexual couples. In the ...

Hello! Fantastic poem! I could only wish that I was that good! This has got to be my favorite stanza: First snow, that crisp castor sugar, turns To grey, squeaking ...

Very well written. I just wish there was more detail on what happen between the two characters. Maybe more detail on how the main character got in his situation. I ...