whitnerrzz

I think you're a talented writer. However, this story is so generic and cliche now more than ever. It felt like Twilight all over again, and though I am a ...

I like it. (: It's cute. However, if I'm being honest, I agree that it needs works. You said that you're more of a story teller than poet. However, you ...

You are an extraordinay writer! "Nothing is ever certain until you hear the rap on the door," tied it all together perfectly. It makes your heart drop for just a ...

I really enoyed this. You used extremely vivid wording, making it very possible to play it out in my mind. In my opinion, that is a key factor in being ...

This story is beautiful! I could see everything in my mind as I read it. I love your word choice! (: As far as grammar, you were lacking a few ...