whitewolfpuppy

Hey! Thank's so much for the review! :3 Now your question about the sheep thing? Yes I said that Wolf fights like a Wolf, that's because Wolf is the fighting ...

Too formal? I'm sorry to say this but my characters are supposed to speak that way due to the fact of respect from master to apprentice. Nothing more I can ...

Hey there! I'll be reviewing this, duh statement. Anyways, I really like this poem, I can understand the emotion you are trying to send to your reader. I love it, ...

As I read other comment's I now understand why the title is that way. Sorry about that! :(

Hey there! I love the review :) I always like it when someone gives me some things to change. Don't worry about being rude, I do have comma issues due ...

Thanks

Thank you! :)

Thanks!! I need names for a sequel! :) Any Idea's?

Thank you so much! :)

I thought I wrote it with the name :( Ha, I haven't read this in such a long time. I recently found this. Thanks!

Also, I just now noticed this. Your first sentence is missing a comma between "I (,) Melissa Smith (,) smiled."

I agree, again I am sorry I was not so focused at the moment. I didn't mean to sound rude either. My IPhone will let me type so much. Thanks.

Thanks! My punctuation is not all that great. I am reading though! I got a book called, "The New Oxford Guide to Writing" (Can't underline in replies :( ha) But ...