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Thank you very much for your critique. I will take it in what you said. c:

I really like this! Great metaphors, ideas, and description. No real critique except use more synonyms for some of the words.

Thank you very much. I am falling in love, I will admit. Also, that is my style. :p

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your review. c:

Thank you very much. c: Means a lot. I appreciate the feedback! c:

Thank you very much! c:

Thank you so much. c: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I understand what you mean about the lines, I'll certainly keep that in mind while writing; I've always had a ...

Wow, I really loved this. I have to read it a few more times to really understand the metaphors you used though. I wouldn't change a thing, still. c:

I enjoyed the outlook you gave in this piece. However, I wish you'd go a little more in depth with this outlook.

I like the passion in the piece a lot. Nice work! The critique I would give is to get the flow a little better in the beginning. -Coley. c:

Thank you very much. c:

Wow, I've never read a poem of this sort before. I really loved it. It showed a lot of passion and raw emotion, as well as thoughts and perspectives. The ...

Thank you very much. c: