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A Uranium bomb strong enough to submerge the entire western coast? Gah. I don't believe it. Plutonium with a water boost? If laced unter the san andreas fault, yeah. But ...

Interesting piece. I was adversed to "Nightingales singing" in here. It seemed so... Ap English induced. And deary me, what ever would henna being doing in the roof of your ...

This concluded most interestingly. I'll say right now: I rather liked it. [the ending] With that being stated, I'll continue my slasher-fest. Your repitition was hodge-podge at best, and painful ...

You've certainly got your views then, don't you? :D You need to work on tying these views into your spectacular imagery; perhaps with haunting, prolific phrases that stand alone when ...

You joined? Sweet. And I'm totally of like mind on the honesty bit. Unless you're honest and wrong. :D jk,jk. I'm Ed. Nice to see we've convinced you.

You REALLY need to learn to proofread before you post. There were some simple, yet glaring errors in this. Simple grammatic slips, a missing word or two, but they make ...

I didn't get past the first couple paragraphs. I'm assuming you meant 'Daily Dues Inn'. Not proofreading your work shows unprofessionalism-- which in turn scares away potential readers. Also, fix ...

Prepare yourself-- this is a rather harsh critique Tears in her eyes, she walked down the bustling city street. I could find this opening line in a thousand other generic ...

It sounds like an Irish drinking song on crack. Try revamping your flow. And your WAAY repative with 'love'. Also, it outright states what happening. Try hinting at it. It'll ...

I echo everyone else. It was good, but it was too short. You might of wanted to add more detail. -- M.B.Author How can you be echoing me if you ...

Ok, now I've actually read this. This entire poem contradicts itself. Even the first two lines do: "I'm not emo I'm just always misunderstood. " Well, good luck with your ...

This sounds like you sat down one day with the intent to write a poem. So you began... 'One part builder', well that sounds interesting enough... but how to make ...

I've told you my viwes in the chat room, I just thought I'd drop in to commend this publicly :D Extremely well-written. It's tone is haunting. Like watching Salad Fingers ...

I found the character wonderfully intriguing. His motive was quite interesting. To the point where I found the cliche boss took aweay from this piece. The crimson necklace throwback at ...

Eh...I didn't quite finish reading this. Fan fiction is hard enough, but fan fiction poetry? A doozy, for sure. Welllll, The opening stanza was cute, in a simplistic sort of ...