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Re: Your Umbrella
i like it but it doesnt explain much.
May 27, 2007 -
Re: Writing
i like it.
May 27, 2007 -
Re: [deleted]
this is really god but it kind of throws me off at the end and stops suddenly
May 27, 2007 -
Re: Against my will
i like it but its a bit confusing almost like it starts in the middle of the poem
May 12, 2007 -
Re: The Ultimate Battle
i like it but the seond to last line is a bit strange
May 12, 2007 -
Re: Quiet Obsession
i like it it realy fits together but the first part kind of cuts off to suddenly
May 12, 2007 -
Re: All the Rhythms
i like it but it seems like a bunch of diferent poems because nothing realy fits together
May 12, 2007 -
Re: What I Wish For
I like it but Looking for a place, for everyone, just to lend doesn't make much sense.
May 9, 2007
