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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Your Umbrella

    i like it but it doesnt explain much.

    May 27, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Writing

    i like it.

    May 27, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: [deleted]

    this is really god but it kind of throws me off at the end and stops suddenly

    May 27, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Against my will

    i like it but its a bit confusing almost like it starts in the middle of the poem

    May 12, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Ultimate Battle

    i like it but the seond to last line is a bit strange

    May 12, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Quiet Obsession

    i like it it realy fits together but the first part kind of cuts off to suddenly

    May 12, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: All the Rhythms

    i like it but it seems like a bunch of diferent poems because nothing realy fits together

    May 12, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What I Wish For

    I like it but Looking for a place, for everyone, just to lend doesn't make much sense.

    May 9, 2007


The best and most beautiful things in the world can not be seen or even touched - they must be felt with the heart.
— Helen Keller