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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Your Umbrella

    i like it but it doesnt explain much.

    Sun May 27, 2007 9:34 pm
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Writing

    i like it.

    Sun May 27, 2007 9:30 pm
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: [deleted]

    this is really god but it kind of throws me off at the end and stops suddenly

    Sun May 27, 2007 9:28 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Against my will

    i like it but its a bit confusing almost like it starts in the middle of the poem

    Sat May 12, 2007 2:49 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Ultimate Battle

    i like it but the seond to last line is a bit strange

    Sat May 12, 2007 2:36 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Quiet Obsession

    i like it it realy fits together but the first part kind of cuts off to suddenly

    Sat May 12, 2007 2:31 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: All the Rhythms

    i like it but it seems like a bunch of diferent poems because nothing realy fits together

    Sat May 12, 2007 2:28 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What I Wish For

    I like it but Looking for a place, for everyone, just to lend doesn't make much sense.

    Wed May 09, 2007 8:49 pm


/I think, today,/ he thought back, /the important fact is that I don't/ need /to be better than him. He can just be a person. And I... I can just be one too./
— Adolin (Wind and Truth by Brandon Sanderson)