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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: General Behind Me#1 Dirty Hands

    WyvrynScribe Thank you so much for the review, it is true about the hatred from the elder sister are so sudden. I should shed a little more backstory in the ...

    Sep 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Melody's Secret #1 Manstros

    darklady Music is one of the greatest passion the main author has. (I'm the co-author by the way). Spelling mistakes, deadly. Will be caution the next time. Anyways, posting Chapter ...

    Sep 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Melody's Secret #1 Manstros

    Luke Starkiller Thank you very much for the advice! Changing tense midway and not sticking to one particular tenses... This is the worst nightmare any writing could face! *Gasping* Over ...

    Sep 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Melody's Secret #1 Manstros

    DarkPandemonium I truly appreciate your master piece of advice. I have learn so much in 5 minutes of your review than I would have normally in 5 hours of book-writing ...

    Sep 25, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Beast

    To answer your questions, 1. Yes, who wouldn't love some magic warrior? 2. Instead of natural, like our everyday conversation, it's more like a theater act natural. 3. Ending, Wooooahhhh, ...

    Sep 16, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Moonless

    Little fox. Thank you very much. This beautiful exquisite work is the first work I read in YWS and I am touched. I actually had to stop my lunch just ...

    Sep 12, 2017


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind