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Re: General Behind Me#1 Dirty Hands
WyvrynScribe Thank you so much for the review, it is true about the hatred from the elder sister are so sudden. I should shed a little more backstory in the ...
Sep 25, 2017 -
Re: Melody's Secret #1 Manstros
darklady Music is one of the greatest passion the main author has. (I'm the co-author by the way). Spelling mistakes, deadly. Will be caution the next time. Anyways, posting Chapter ...
Sep 25, 2017 -
Re: Melody's Secret #1 Manstros
Luke Starkiller Thank you very much for the advice! Changing tense midway and not sticking to one particular tenses... This is the worst nightmare any writing could face! *Gasping* Over ...
Sep 25, 2017 -
Re: Melody's Secret #1 Manstros
DarkPandemonium I truly appreciate your master piece of advice. I have learn so much in 5 minutes of your review than I would have normally in 5 hours of book-writing ...
Sep 25, 2017 -
Re: Beast
To answer your questions, 1. Yes, who wouldn't love some magic warrior? 2. Instead of natural, like our everyday conversation, it's more like a theater act natural. 3. Ending, Wooooahhhh, ...
Sep 16, 2017 -
Re: Moonless
Little fox. Thank you very much. This beautiful exquisite work is the first work I read in YWS and I am touched. I actually had to stop my lunch just ...
Sep 12, 2017
