wellmanwriter

Well, after I posted that I realized there were two parts preceding it, so I suppose I may have to retract some statements after reading those...

It'd help if you explained a little more about what's going on. I have no idea what the line of fire is- but apparently it's important since it's the title.

The thing about this is, it's the prologue. I purposely didn't go too much into the characters because this is just meant to be a little background on the story. ...

that was deep. =]

...Really? I think it was just a random name I chose without looking it up or anything, though I don't remember for sure. Ha! haha, that's awesome. it totally fits ...

A few grammatical and spelling errors at the beginning and end, but all-in-all I'm pretty impressed.

Ha! That was clever. I always enjoy retellings of classic stories, and this one was up to par =]