warhorse51

It actually was. :D :D :'( I was trying to express the sadness by just telling what was happening. Maybe because I thought that most people could have experienced this ...

I'll keep in mind to utilize punctuation to separate one point from another. At first I thought I wrote this with utmost clarity but this simply means there is room ...

The scenes are playing out in my mind as I read further. A good example of show>tell when writing. Somehow I think this subtly tells that every being starts the ...