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Thank you so much for such a detailed and informative review! I'll definitely take it all on board when I revise the piece. I originally wrote it as a 15 ...

Hi! Thanks for your review. I wrote this in two sittings without reading back over my work (like a fool), which led to some fast and confusing plot changes. When ...

Hi!! The clarity and grammar stuff are things I've tried to correct when rewriting this, and your review actually helped me a lot in considering how Cyril would truly react ...

Thanks for your feedback, and sorry it took so long to reply! When I started writing this initially, it became obvious that Cyril and Sydney co exist really heavily. They've ...

Hi! Sorry for not replying (even though I think I clicked like??) I think Austen does go back, but he realizes it's not right. I mean, he's completely stuck in ...

HELLO! sorry its taken me a really long time to reply. I think when you write something sad, it's gotta be kinda funny. Life is funny a lot of the ...

thank you so much!!! the grammar etc is stuff i would definitely fix upon editing, but thanks for pointing it out. Also, I didn't really think about his mum but ...

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AS IF you actually read my writing i'm really embarrassed but glad you enjoyed it and said nice things about it. I've never understood speech mark punctuation so thanks for ...