vines-of-beauty

Sorry I didn't mean to send that I wasn't finished - - - - - - - - - - - You need to improve on writting image, I know ...

I didn't like it all that much, it's not that it wasn't well written because it was, just it's too short. Short but refreshing. Yes, yes short but refreshing... mhm ...

I think that its a well done. But here's how to fix it... Quote: My darling! and if you need me, I’ll be away, darling, away: it means far from ...

Well done! *claps hands* This poem has meaning, it's not to hard but not to soft....if that makes sense! Anyway, I think you have alot of talent!! You could of ...

So what's the name of this "chrush":P I'm kidding ! Anyway the poem its self is ...well...not bad but not amazing! The idea is perfect, well wait what am i ...

I do agree with everyone else because this poem could really do allot! It's not very strong at the moment, but that can be easily fixed:P It's not very descriptive, ...

Pheble your so mean on your critics! :shock: Maybe she/he wanted to repeat the line! Give her/him a chance she/he said she/he was new! Don't be hasty now! C'mon we ...