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Jee, I'm glad you liked it! Thank you. :-)

Okay, omg, this is one of my favorite comments on this. Thank you so much. Seriously. Ahh!

As defined by urban dictionary, here is what it means to be 'left on seen': Leave on seen Iphone usres or Facebook messenger. . . When reading a message and ...

Awh, Gawsh. Don't make me blush.

Thank you, Moon!

Pastel, you seriously have no idea how much this comment meant to me. It's seriously a cherry on top to a good morning. Thanks, pal. Means the world!

Thank you for the kind words, buddy. Means lots.

Glad you liked it, Soq.

Yeah, earlier I got some similar critiques and I do want to change that up a bit with that line. Thanks for the helpful review.

Awesomesauce! :) Can't wait to check it out.

I think it should! Just so that it doesn't feel sudden. And no problem, your stories are great reads.

I totally get you. It's that sort of emptional overdrive kind of creation. No problem. :)

No problem, buddio. :) First part: Don't remove the quote, it's fine. The opening is subtle and mysterious enough to create a sense of unease (a good thing since this ...

Thank you! Your observations will be considered!

The structure's great. You're a great poet. :) The changes really made it a smooth read. Kudos.