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victorroono

  • Poetry » Science, Nature Re: The Forest of Wisdom

    Crickets and birds ask and accept I love how this creates a picture of how learners showcase interest, and it really rhymes with the stanza's topic. The Science of Life ...

    Sep 6
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: I'm a laburnum but she's a....

    I love the way my first expectation was a long continuous poem but it took a while for me to feel the energy. Majestic and strong use of words. she's ...

    Sep 5
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The perfect childhood

    I love the creativity you put in this piece. I feel how the simplicity of having your own not another expectation of your own childhood. It clearly defines how we ...

    Sep 5
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Movies at Randy’s!

    One of the things I enjoyed most about this excerpt is how naturally it builds tension without relying on anything supernatural. Even though 'The Ring; is playing in the background, ...

    Jul 26
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: The Woman I Crowned(I secretly do not wish for this to reach her ever)

    I placed a crown upon her head. Not of gold gold is far too ordinary but of belief. And suddenly she stood taller. This feels emotional entirely. First, if not ...

    Jul 21


They who talk all day of beauty call all the plain things dirty
— John Darnielle