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Re: The Forest of Wisdom
Crickets and birds ask and accept I love how this creates a picture of how learners showcase interest, and it really rhymes with the stanza's topic. The Science of Life ...
Sep 6 -
Re: I'm a laburnum but she's a....
I love the way my first expectation was a long continuous poem but it took a while for me to feel the energy. Majestic and strong use of words. she's ...
Sep 5 -
Re: The perfect childhood
I love the creativity you put in this piece. I feel how the simplicity of having your own not another expectation of your own childhood. It clearly defines how we ...
Sep 5 -
Re: Movies at Randy’s!
One of the things I enjoyed most about this excerpt is how naturally it builds tension without relying on anything supernatural. Even though 'The Ring; is playing in the background, ...
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Re: The Woman I Crowned(I secretly do not wish for this to reach her ever)
I placed a crown upon her head. Not of gold gold is far too ordinary but of belief. And suddenly she stood taller. This feels emotional entirely. First, if not ...
Jul 21
