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I love the depth in this work, and how you can create such a masterpiece with easy "standard" rhymes. I love your language, and the way you write. There's not ...

Thank you for your review! I appreciate it, and I'll keep working on my grammar. As said, English is not my native language, but I'll get there!

I don't know quite what to say, but this work is fantastic and I love the way you've written it!

Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm fifteen from Norway so my English grammar isn't perfected quite yet, but I'll get there. Thank you.

Thanks a lot for your feedback! I agree with your thoughts about showing, not telling. This was a school assignment so I had to write it in a way so ...

Thank you a lot! I'm fifteen from Norway so I haven't quite perfected my English grammar yet. I really appreciate your feedback!I'll work with the tense you mention next time ...