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Hey, emilygale, Wow, I loved it! Your writing style is pretty developed and I liked the way you wrote things. In the beginning of the story, I liked how you ...

Wow, I loved it! Especially the first two lines. The picture of wind "dancing across your face was a beautiful picture! But I didn't get the "I am the melody" ...

Hey oneeyedunicornhunter, First off, well done. The imagery was great. There were a few parts I really liked, such as: I think about waves pushing and pulling, The horizon decked ...

Hey! Good job writing this piece. The words were well placed and easy to read. I liked the description of the line on the chalkboard being red. Just a good ...

Hey! First, awesome storyline. It was a pretty good idea overall, and the way you made the fairies not little, but people-sized was very imaginative. It was a little bit ...

Hey! You've got an interesting plot here. The idea that you have to be qualified to be a villianess is interesting. :) This could be a great story, but I ...

Brava! Brava! *claps handss vigorously* Loved the second part! Like I said, the two frineds have lots of character. Good job describing them, but what does Rune look like? Anyway, ...

Hey! Love the story. I think the overall lplot is good, classic rescue the princess, but if you continue the story, I'd advise you to try to be really original ...

Hey EmmVeePi, This is pretty good. The intro was awesome; great job characterizing his walking stick and sending the reader into the direction you want them to be thinking while ...

Hey Bokkaku! This was really cute. I understood it after I read the spoiler. It's not really that obcious that it is a toddler, but once the reader finds out, ...

*whistles in admiration* I have a feeling this is an older post, but it wass really good just the same. The battle strategy was excellent; it wasn't just ripped from ...

Hey Omi! You did a pretty good job on this piece. It really has the feel of a Nancy Drew mystery. I can tell you read them a lot. The ...

Whoa, this is really interesting. It actually seems more like Sci-Fi than Fantasy Fiction, but there may e more to come, so I'll let you decide. The plot is really ...

Hey! Wow, really good job writing this. The action scenes were awesome, and the way you wrote it was really good. A lot of times, writers have trouble putting sentences ...

Hey, nice job on this piece. I liked how you portrayed the gloominess of the town in the story. The whole thing had kind of a Twilight Zone feel to ...