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vertigo1

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Society

    I really enjoyed it. The rhythm somehow fits the idea behind the poem, I loved that, especially the first stanza. Also the examples chosen are spot-on. Wear our clothes and ...

    Aug 24, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: The Interview

    I would try and play around with it a little to add more rhythm Oh, what's your hobby? - I teach. Yeah. But, hobbies? - I prepare lecture sheets and ...

    Aug 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A Spark to write again

    Loved it from the very first lines. I tried pushing myself, even taking a break I can't express just how much I relate to this. All I needed was a ...

    Aug 21, 2015
  • Lyrics » Satire, Literature Re: Randy Savage Concept Rap

    Unfortunately I probably don't get the WWE references, but in terms of rap it's quite good and I enjoyed it. Bam! Chop! Swoosh! Smack! Ric Flair is whack! The last ...

    Aug 20, 2015


A person is a fool to become a writer. His only compensation is absolute freedom. He has no master except his own soul, and that, I am sure, is why he does it.
— Roald Dahl