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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Idiot Boxed Life

    I like how some of it rhymes. I'm all for profanity, the more the better, but it's placed awkwardly, out of context, for me, that is. My favorite part though: ...

    Mar 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: with my cigarettes

    Maybe I really like your poem because I can relate, and isn't that what poetry supposed to do? Anyway, the beginning is mostly my favorite then you just kind of ...

    Sep 23, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: control freak

    Lovely piece ! You started off very strong, and I was captivated instantly. I do agree with PenguinAttack though, you start off amazing and then kind of start to drag ...

    Sep 21, 2012


I was flummoxed by fractious Franny's decision to abrogate analgesics for the moribund victims of the recent conflagration. Of course, to display histrionics was discretionary, but I did so anyways, implicating a friend in my drama to make the effect cumulative. I think a misanthrope would have a prosaic appellation, perhaps one related to autonomy and the rejection of anthropocentrism. I think they wouldn't think much of the prominence of watching the coagulation of tea to prognosticate future malevolent events, not even if those events were related to jurisprudence.
— Spearmint