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Sorry, but I'll have to disagree with that last part :P Long descriptions are only bad when you're speaking of a main character, as the reader should get to know ...

Shakespeare didn't write short stories, he wrote poetry and plays. Just a small tip. If you'd like a full review of this, feel free to message me ;)

Did I say I would review this yesterday? Yeah, I'm not very punctual with anything. I'll get to it tonight, hopefully :D

And so to emphasize the point that this doesn't need a review, you post this as a review. Hm.

Thanks Snoink :D Blame my silly teach for all the odd ingredients, she said the stranger the better xP And by drinking, I meant the potion, not alcohol xP But ...

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! :D

Thanks, Noni! I'm glad the rhyme and flow was fine, even if nothing else was xP That's probably all I needed to pass anyway.

Violet and Purple are two different colors. Using them as synonyms wouldn't make any sense since it can only be one or the other. Sorry, just had to point that ...

If you say so.

Heh, no problem :D

... *snaps*

Like a really bad metaphor. I see no metaphors. You used the word 'like' every time you compared something. Be that not the work of a simile? For that, you ...

Congratulate* :/

:D Thanks, Patch. I wasn't really expecting a lot of people to pull out the subtle details I put in. For that I think I should congratulation you.

Beautiful.