vedmathai29

It was a good read. Quite gifted you are.(But the why the paranthesis.) If you read any novel as such they would never, if rarely ever use paranthesis. Try to ...

It was nice. But some general pointers. There were some spelling errors, but I will let someone else point them out for you. The idea behind the story good, using ...

Good adaptation of the topic. Very good connection. Only thing I felt was that your story was very straight forward: an intro, middle and ending. That is fine, but I ...

Brilliant! Held my attention through-out! Your timing and build up was just perfect for your satirical piece. I agree with trsai and you, your characters don't need any names at ...

I agree it is a difficult topic, and I found both positives and negatives in your piece. Firstly, the fact that you were unsure of yourself when righting this piece ...

First of all, the tone of the poem is the same any piece on harp would have. Slow, steady, meaningful. The description of velvets, silks, and suits, though tactile, gives ...