vamplord12

hey Lupe...it's me again...and i'm reviewing/critiquing your stuff...i'm like a stalker aren't i? but it isn't stalking cause i know you want me to follow you... A growl slipped past ...

i like is a start to a very good story, and to agree with Wolf...you do have some spelling errors in there that you need to fix, and since you ...

this was a very good story...i liked how there was the twist on the life of an assassin and what could potentially happen if you were to become one. the ...

i like this...you should really continue it...like, her grandmother dies or something and then she goes and lives with the wolves...that would be so cool...but it is very good, you ...

you know Lupe...even though this is from one of the people closest to you, who would obviously like this since we all love you, but i think this is really ...

i also think that it is sad, but weird in a way that i cant explain. and im not dead and i hope that i wont be soon. you are ...