Published June 2, 2008
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Hey I caught a lot of mistakes I made that all you guys didn't.
Haha! 
And I have half of it typed up now. In a little bit I shall post it hopefully.
I'll try my best.
-Amber
What?? Where's the rest??? I Loveeeeeddd It! That is such a cool twist to red riding hood! I totally didn't see that coming. I love it when people take old stories and twist them up like that and The picture at the bottom. One word: AMAZING! the wolf is incredibly hot and i like his personality. Red and the wolf are mean for each other! 8 ^ P Keep writing!
Oh, yeah. Just to tell all this is going to continue.
Yeah!
There will be wolf language to give you a spoiler but it's all made up.
Hope you like the second part of it too. When I get it up that is.
Nice to see you both.
Yes... Um.. I'm not sure it'll be like this. I kinda got the idea to write diffrent stories of Red Rdining hood and I wanted to use pictures too so this is the outcome.*shrug*
I might continue but I will also continue my first though of idea.
Thanks,
-Amber
i like this...you should really continue it...like, her grandmother dies or something and then she goes and lives with the wolves...that would be so cool...but it is very good, you are a great writer and i would most definitely keep reading your stuff.
Wow! That was a really cool twist to red riding hood. Holy crap. I can still feel the wolf's kiss. (I was thinkng of some one else!) The description was amazing, as always. You are a really good writer! Please continue your story.