vampirelover101

I like your piece. It's very good. But the one thing that consernes me is that you wrote about something to do with religion. I am a god lover to ...

I love it! But the thing is you only used 1 punctuation mark. I think your poem is very good because it sounds mysterious and I like the rhymes that ...

That poem was so good!!!!!!!!!!!! It showed how someone feels either it's you or not. Great use of rhymes to. I really could understand how a little girl or boy ...