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  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: An Irresistible Cape

    Thank you so much for the review~ When writing the poem I did imagine that the narrator was talking about another person, but I'm so happy that you had such ...

    Jul 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Childhood Room

    Thank you so much for the kind and detailed review, I'm glad you liked it! :D

    Jul 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: An Irresistible Cape

    no worries at all, I appreciate the fact that you cared to correct me either way!

    Jul 7, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: An Irresistible Cape

    Hi, thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review! I really enjoyed reading your interpretations/analysis. While writing this poem I was actually imagining a female narrator ...

    Jul 5, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: An Irresistible Cape

    Hi! Thank you so much for your detailed review and feedback :D Regarding the spelling, I actually follow British english not American english, hence I spelled both words as "realised" ...

    Jul 5, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Part of the Painting

    Thank you so much for the feedback! I'd like to clarify that 'fulfil' is the UK English spelling, which is what I follow. Also, when I first wrote this poem ...

    May 28, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Childhood Room

    Thank you so much! :)

    May 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Part of the Painting

    I appreciate the kind comment, and I tried my best to do just that :) Thank you so much!!

    May 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Childhood Room

    Thank you for the kind words and letting me know what worked best! I'm happy you enjoyed it :D

    May 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Childhood Room

    Thank you so much, it was my first time experimenting with this topic and I'm glad you liked it :)

    May 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Greater than you Think

    Hi! I honestly found this poem at such a perfect time. I have been drowning in insecurities lately and came on here for some hope and this poem gave me ...

    May 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Part of the Painting

    Thank you so much for your comment!!

    May 9, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Part of the Painting

    You have no idea how happy your comment made me, thank you so much! I'm glad it resonated with you :)

    May 9, 2023


One by one they went / And, though each laughed as he returned to earth / Their souls were in their eyes.
— Alfred Noyes (Watchers of the Sky)