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This is good. Just one suggestion though, it's not necessary, but you could try following a more regular pattern so that the words flow off the tongue easier. Otherwise it ...

This is really good. And to snoweary, I think amethystnight didn't mean she had to drink her own blood but that she had to drink the blood that was given ...

I think it's really good. I didn't read the spoiler until I was almost halfway through but I got where you were going before that. Often my writing takes a ...

Awesome... totally creepy but really good, Raffi agrees. :D The way you described her mothers glee at Georgy seeing her was so creepy. I loved it. Does [i]hunger[i] mean something ...