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I know right its like reading what you wrote again when you already no what's next....boring but it is important

I have no idea about what you just said but thanks for telling anyways.....and wishing me luck :)

thanks for your time really, well I know that very clearly but I so am not in a mood to proofread it. I will do it in this week so ...

again thank you

I really feel honored...thankx

I didn't know beyonce had a song like that...never heard it too...this was just something I imagined and put it into a song.....thank you for your review, and I am ...

hey thank you for the review and happy to know that you liked it....

First of all Thanx for the review The lower case mistakes were kind of ...not mistakes actually... I was typing fast and it usually turns out that way for me ...

hmmm....thanx for the review.....I will consider these points and to be honest I didn't go through it again because I felt too lazy but now I will....thanx again for your ...

you should work on the names and the starting is a little shaky but over all your story really is good...keep working hard and read it once again then maybe ...

ohk.....but tht dosent change the fact tht dis was grt....anywayyz m lookin forword to da tenth chapter though i just started to read da 2 one

I purposely made her aunt like that....really jumpy and kind of childish.....i thought it might be fun... hmm though i will keep the other advise in mind... thanx for your ...