Young Writers Society

Oh crap oh crap! The crap hits the fan! I loved the dynamics between the all of the characters here, and they're all so colorful. I'm excited to see how ...

Wowza! I saw your part four in the green room and decided that I should probably read the other parts as well and let me tell you, I am not ...

Oh man! This was really cool. It was such surreal experience just reading this poem with all of its strange imagery and themes. I quite enjoy how you paired up ...

Hey! I haven't done a review in a while! You're the lucky vict- I mean... I don't know what I mean. Anyway, when I started this, the first sentence kinda ...

Your imagery was amazing! I agree with Lumi, however, in every sense. There were some moments that didn't need as much imagery, and sometimes the formatting struck me as a ...

Oh wow! I haven't read a poem that has gotten me that enraptured in a while. I could see everything so vividly. I quite enjoyed your metaphor to the war ...

I agree with niteowl. Your main character was very colourful, in a good and a bad sense. The MC seemed really fleshed out. I'm going to assume that they're based ...

This is a very interesting story, and I love it. I, myself, love to write legends like these. However, I have a slight problem. There seems to be no thought ...

I hope you don't mind, but I'm going to skip the niceties and just go straight into the review part. I hope that'll be alright since you're begging for reviews. ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It was engaging and I could feel the winter, almost. The love was almost palpable. I love that a lot about this poem. I only ...

I think you gave it a good try. Unfortunately, the horror aspect of this didn't really grip me. There wasn't a lot of atmosphere and I didn't really feel for ...

Let me just say that I'm surprised by this. I thought I had the ending figured out. I thought it would be an anecdote against violence, or war. Instead, you ...

I'm assuming that English is not your native language? I'm sorry for jumping to this conclusion, and I would offer some things that I liked if I were able to ...

I quite enjoyed this. It nicely illustrates the struggles not only of a person being taken by a vampire, but a person being sucked into a new and frightening world. ...

I'm really bad with reviews. I apologize. The format I do them in is just not very pleasing for the reader, but it's efficient. I'll first give you my criticisms, ...