tzmanda

With your story, it should be really interesting but it just doesn't grip the reader as much as it should. I found your sentences too short and .....hmm.........simple. When I ...

I loved it!!! :D :D :D :D :D I was so absorbed in the story that I didn't notice any errors!! More, please!! :wink:

Well, I enjoyed it and was able to read it to the end without my mind drifting, which is good. There are some minor grammatical errors, I found that there ...

Well, I personally have nothing against fantasy thieves and I found yours quite interesting. I kept wondering through out the story, though, who had magical abilities and who didn't. (if ...

Okay, Well I guess I'll start by saying that I really enjoyed it. I would have to agree with some of the other reviews that the explainatins are sometimes just ...

well, being you're sister, I can really relate to this poem!! :wink: Though, I must say, it doesn't really flow as well as some of you're other poetry. :? You ...

I've read you're story up to about chapter 10 and I love it! I can't wait to read the rest! I haven't really got anything to say on grammer and ...