turtlechow

Alright, I have to start off in saying that I really like this piece. In fact, I can really relate because I'm still afraid of being myself around my parents ...

I must say I am impressed. I can't remember whether or not I could write this well at age thirteen, but that is irrelevent. You definitely have me interested, and ...

Oooh... good poem. Kudos for you! Yeah, I really don't know a lot of poetry, but I can totally see the references to all the different situations, etc. that Akito ...

When I started reading this poem, I totally thought you were dissing your cat, but I know exactly how it feels to own a cat that doesn't let you work ...

I'm not sure exactly what it is about this poem that makes me like it, but I definitely like it. I can totally relate as I am now a college ...

I do say, this is quite an interesting piece. The plot has me captivated, and though the flow was choppy at a few points, I really can't complain. Very enjoyable ...

I think you need to have some parallelism. Separate your subjects: A soft velvet nose where just being able to touch it is like a kiss on the cheek. Big ...

Lovely, lovely poetry! There are some seriously deep emotions here, I think (even though I hate romance of every kind... LOL). Anyway, it just goes to show that not all ...

Ooh, bravo... a good start with an interesting potential main character. I'm sad for Jazool, though, but it really does capture the cruel realities of the world nicely. Well done! ...