tuckerluvr

“You were kind of eager in there.” He said, scowling. Eager for what? Also... cap those I's! I really want some more of this :D

Edit, Edit Edit! There are standard typos on this; the characters are a bit bland, and the run-ons are a problem, too. If you edit, then this would be one ...

I, too, don't know wether Jenson is a boy or girl. I also agree that you are just rephrasing the idea that Jenson is going to have something life changing ...