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I really like this. ^-^ The man is pulling the trigger now. Bye bye. I agree with Twit; I don't like this part. Just ending with 'Like a penny' would ...

This was wonderful, and I used to be obsessed with Jurassic Park. :) A few nit-picks, however. He hoped the backpacks they were truly were weather resistant. I should be ...

I loved this. I like the shortness and structure of the story, and it had inspired me to write something like this. The man is interesting indeed; feeding ducks and ...

With one last glance at sky, I reluctantly pushed April forwards, into the wood. Once we were completely covered by the canopy of the trees, the light from the stars ...

Very good! It was very interesting1I went through the whole thing fixing the "magyk">"magic" parts, until the end where I was like "oh". If I were you, I would hint ...

I honesty couldn't stop laughing while reading this. Those pictures at the begining were so cute :) What YWS has come to... the battle of penguins and meercats, but in ...

I have several problems with this. First, It seemed rushed to me. One minute their inside, and the next their in the stable. Second, DESCRIBE!!! What color was the stallion? ...

Hello again! I couldn't find any grammar errors or typos, but then again I just woke up about half an hour ago ;). I liked how Aralyn threw a fit ...

Then, I silently pressed on through the dark forest, the many branches like hands reaching out to grab me. I would get rid of the "Then". A light breeze whistled ...

*I know it's not quite finished, but I promise I'll post soon!* Chapter 2. Jake leaned against the car, the force of her punch knocking the wind out of him. ...

Chapter 1 It was coming. She could feel it. The burn, the flames…the fire! Her rage pored should be "poured" through her, fueling the madness. The flames consumed her, glowing ...

He's there he's there I feel him everywhere I want to run Coz' I just know i just know fix "coz They say look around theres no one to be ...

I liked the main idea of it, but I felt as if the part about the butterflies was odd. Change that up a bit. Also, follow up her experience with ...

Overall, I thought that it was really good. No typos as far as I could tell, and I liked the format of the flashbacks. I, to, don't see how the ...

Freaks! Intro: "W-what are you? The boy stammered, a shaky hand dropped the knife that used to be held firm for defense. This part seems a little weird. I would ...