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*Allyn’s heart felt like it was going to burst. Sweat began to drip down his face. You should put a question mark after a question. Also, the third paragraph could ...

Well, honestly, this was one confusing read. I had to read it quite a few times and I'm still not sure about a few things. If the part where Raunak ...

This was great! There's a typo that you should correct - calloused. Other than that, yes, this poem was way too long. And the spacing made it seem even longer! ...

First of all, I must say the way characters are introduced sounds pretty cool but there is a lack of punctuation making it extremely hard to read. I don't think ...

Well, the first thing I'd like to point out is that the text on the pictures is highly unreadable. You can't really expect someone to read it. It probably would ...

Okay, so I went to the Green Room and saw this piece had no comments so that's why I read it. But since I haven't read the book from the ...

I really liked the idea behind this story. I haven't read many stories like this that focus on beggars or poverty. The harsh reality you pointed out in this story ...