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Re: The Recovery
Hi nice story i like your detail and the base line of your story.You had lots of great historical content, the only thing i wonder about is if you could ...
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Re: Haun lan
Hey gema, This story is great i really like the historical content and how you did a lot of show not tell through out the story. Your story is very ...
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: Ocean Of Dread
I liked how descriptive you were and how you showed not telled. The story was very entertaining and provided great historical details. I liked how you really put effort out ...
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: From Time to Time part 3: The Birthday
Wow this story ended way different then i thought it would. I really like how how there was a moral to the story and pertained a lot to what we ...
Mar 14, 2016
