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  • Poetry » General, General Re: saturday night

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    Rooting your tender feet doesn't make enough sense to me, it is like someone is standing for their balance and stability but it doesn't make sense for it to go, ...

    Feb 25, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: saturday night

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    Feb 25, 2019
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Crocuses

    Wow. This is just...amazing! I just want to say it was very enjoyable, great imagery, great story telling. This really isn't much of a review but all I have to ...

    Feb 25, 2019
  • Short Story » General, Science Fiction Re: Humana Avis

    Thanks so much for the feedback! As far as my writing style goes it was definitely experimental. I've seen a couple works with this short choppy style, almost in a ...

    Feb 24, 2019
  • Short Story » General, Science Fiction Re: Humana Avis

    Thanks for the Feedback!!! I really appreciate it!! And the part about the rabbit and the ram, I went back and edited because I knew people would not understand but ...

    Feb 22, 2019


/I think, today,/ he thought back, /the important fact is that I don't/ need /to be better than him. He can just be a person. And I... I can just be one too./
— Adolin (Wind and Truth by Brandon Sanderson)