tintomara138

Thank you so much for the review. I find your attitude a bit formalist, which I don't necessarily dislike. However, I don't see it as the most important part of ...

Hi! Thank you for the review. Personally, consistency is quite boring, commas and full stops are unnecessary. Our styles are obviously different. Nevertheless, I appreciate the review.

Thank you so much!

Hi! Thank you so much for the review, it means a lot to me! (Especially for a poem such as this one, which is rather personal)

Hi! I'll make sure I'll restrict it, even though I didn't mention any alcohol (which was a bottle of brandy). Thank you for the comment!

Hey! Thank you so much for the review! You don't know how much the words you said mean to me. (It's the bottle of alcohol.)

I absolutely love this poem! I cannot find anything that I would change. I think it's raw and honest - just what a good poem needs to be. It's rare ...

Thank you for the review! I'm really glad you liked my poem. The first lines about life and death are well interpreted. I'm also not quite satisfied with the 'sunburn'. ...