timmy41

misuse of the quote tool....total face palm. and wow, unlucky dude.

use your imagination guys. you've gotta rap it. still kinda poor and lazy with the rhymes and well..the whole idea. but if you rap it, it at leasts has funniness ...

r u rly 23?? lol.

ily Curley

i would feel a bit uppity trying to critique something far better than i could ever do. It's a bit vain. ./

what's not to get? the alliteration makes me shiver, its something new and beyond most of the crap posted on here. oh well i guess some people just dont get ...

Hey, Timmy41. ^_^ This is actually really awesome- it's probably my favorite thing I've read on YWS in quite awhile. You drew me in with poetry and tragedy, and it ...

thanks. yeah i have always had problems with blatantly ridiculous gramatical errors. thanks for picking up on my many shames hahaha. haha the $50 billion thing. Well, in my head ...