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  • Art » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Story of Mother Nature and The Slasher

    I loved the way you portrayed this piece of mythology. It’s clear that you put a lot of time and care into them, and for that you get a lot ...

    Dec 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Doll

    Ooh, I'm totally getting Annabelle vibes from this! You should really be proud of this piece, it's amazing. First, I want to point out the formatting. It must have been ...

    Dec 1, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Thief - Prologue (By Amethyst Hendrix)

    This certainly reminds me of the Giver in terms of the roles people get (Seer, Storytellers, etc.) It’s a very strong prologue, to me, at least. The most interesting character ...

    Dec 1, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Gift of Life

    Aaah, I honestly don’t know how to start off with reviewing this, but I guess I’ll say that I commend you for having the patience to write so much so ...

    Dec 1, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: I am Mari (Chapter 1)

    The concept of this piece makes me think of Stranger Things, especially the first episode. I don’t know if this is is inspired by it, but it reminded me of ...

    Dec 1, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: Prologue-Marry-Anne

    This is an amazing prologue. It thrust the reader right into the scene with an incredibly sad, albeit intriguing introduction to Anne’s life. I have a lot of questions concerning ...

    Dec 1, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Smell of Emotion?

    This is a really sweet poem. I love how it reads like a limerick, it’s simple and goes in an ABAB pattern I think? The perspective you take on is ...

    Nov 28, 2020


Human minds are more full of mysteries than any written book and more changeable than the cloud shapes in the air.
— Louisa May Alcott