time8keeper

So, first off, I definitely enjoyed this. You've definitely got talent in the writing area! I like science fiction and apocalypse stories in general, so this definitely piqued my interest, ...

Hehehe... this made me laugh :D Usually parodies of songs are just "eh, okay, whatever." in my book, but this is awesome! This had all the right elements: Witty lines, ...

So I really really really liked this! It depicts the struggle a child has with their overactive imaginations and fears perfectly. I wish I was as brave as Sandy when ...

First off, I really really really reallyyyy liked this! It's really true too. There are a lot of girls like Clara and a lot of guys like... what was the ...

Completely epic books! I totally agree with you! I have always been facinated by Greek mythology so this series was that much more awesome for me :D Can't wait to ...

Oh my god. Wow. So this is totally amazing. And it really means quite a lot to me due to the fact my dad lives 13 hours away and I ...

This is fun and cute! I loved it! I think a really great thing about this is that it's so believable! And you can really picture people acting the parts! ...

Loooveeeeee it! :D Seriously. Sure there were a few typos, some things that didn't run very smoothly, and I do agree that it wasn't dramtic enough, but the feeling was ...

This is really very intersting and compelling. I kind of maybe sort of have an idea of what the story is but it's probably horribly wrong. Whatever this is, it's ...

Hmmm, I have mixed feelings on this. The lyrics seem really choppy. Each line is like "Okay, I'm here... Neeexxxttt line." I'm sure a lot of feeling was put into ...

Ooooh! This is amazing! Really really really good! Yes, it is quite depressing but that's okay! I like the first one the best. It really paints a picture, a depressing ...

I agree with Ermixon on all the points he/she brought up. There are a lot of sentences that appear sort of flat. By using more descriptive and strong words you ...

If you enjoy fantasy, Graceling by Kristin Cashore would be amazing for you. It's got a little bit of everything in it. I recently read it (after my sister forced ...

I like the idea of this story. It's not just another story about some kid being a hero all the time, it's showing a darker side, which is pretty cool. ...

All I can say is: "Wow." It's crazy how much feeling is put into this poem. I can feel the pain of the girl, just as I can see her ...