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I think this would be a fantastic story except that it is a bit choppy. I had a hard time reading it because of that problem. your theme is very ...

has anyone made it this far yet? any opinions for the 4th onwards :)? should i upload the rest ?

Post more post more :D :P

@zan Thanks for the review :) no worries, I didnt take any offence :) I mean I put it up here for people to read and review and

That sounds better. Ok, i may just be being stupid, but what does this mean? "As Blinded Colony – Need started I listened in on the trio’s conversation. " Blinded ...

Hmmm maybe I should write down why I swear and talk about sex so much? See the story originated in the shower

Well well well. I must admit that was very interesting. It made me laugh. I really don't have much to say about it. I didn't notice anything bad about it ...

Thanks for the review, I will fix up those bits. I must confess I'm not the best with commas so the story has sorta got that problem throughout. I'm uploading ...

Does it suck so much that no one will even review it? O_O

still loving it, you keep it straight and to the point also and always interesting! onto next chapter :D

just read it :) my review is when is the 2nd chapter coming ;)?

Well as I said in my 2nd post of this topic, most of that is all just bits and pieces I want in the book. So pretty much for a ...

no reviews :(

no reviews :(

As with the last chapters no complaints.... onto 6