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Re: (Untitled)
First of all, I really liked it, but it does need some work. I agree with Empress; you really did have to sacrifice a lot to make it rhyme. Personally, ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: A Boy Named "He"
That was really amazing! I love not only the beautiful way you conveyed everything, but the uniqueness of the idea. This is a truly impressive poem for which I will ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: the walrus sings at midnight
Ok, wow! I loved it! It reminded me of a fairytale, what with the whimsical-ness and the merryment, and the animals doing stuff they shouldn't logically be able to do! ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: A Little Creepy Poem
Awesome poem! I loved it!!! I don't know much about the formatting/rythm/whatever else there is of a poem (and by that I mean I know nothing :wink: ). However, I ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Childs play part two point five
LOVED it!!! I think this is my favorite part of the story so far, probably because I can relate to the whole "never even had a best friend" thing. I ...
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Child's play part 2
AWESOME!!! I think it even topped the first part. ^^ Your writing style is just plain enviable it's so good! I absolutely loved the cutting scene. Just the right amount ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Child's Play Part One
Okay, wow! Really, just wow! That was fantastic! I was sucked into the story at the very beginning. This was brilliant! I must say, I am liking this Priyesh guy. ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Forever dead
Okay, I'm just going to say it even though it seems like an extremely vast understatement: I loved it! I think this is the best death sequence I have ever ...
Jan 3, 2010